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  • Sharkytrav
    Click clack bloop
    • Jul 2020
    • 580
    • Austin

    #16
    Haiku belongs here
    New challenges for new threads
    the bells toll for thee
    Feedback: https://www.mcarterbrown.com/forum/b...ytrav-feedback

    Looking for splashy mag parts.

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    • Axel
      AI-Powered Mod Bot
      • Jul 2020
      • 2187
      • MCB Building Sub-Basement Level 2 Genetic Modification Lab

      #17
      Forget pile'o'poo
      The new MCB contest:
      Scrive the best haiku
      Originally posted by Phantom1313
      now you can loudly shout “I know things” and nobody can argue with you when you wildly wave your masters degree in front to them
      Dulce et decorum est pro comoedia mori

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      • rawbutter
        rawbutter commented
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        That would be hilarious. I will gladly volunteer to judge. To write a haiku, one must only (A) follow the 5-7-5 syllable rule and (B) write about a common, everyday thing (like a paintball). To write a GOOD haiku, however, the poem should also have some deeper meaning. I tried doing this on my very first one, intending to imply that we are all, in a way, bubbles trapped inside the relatively tiny sphere of Earth, yearning for true, unlimited freedom that never really comes. But I don't think I got there. Not if you didn't already get that without my explaining it to you. I'd love to see someone actually come up with something truly good.

        (Sorry for not making all this a haiku, but I just couldn't figure out a way to do it.)
    • Sharkytrav
      Click clack bloop
      • Jul 2020
      • 580
      • Austin

      #18
      Marker of the year
      get your butt to the dead zone
      Appreciated
      Feedback: https://www.mcarterbrown.com/forum/b...ytrav-feedback

      Looking for splashy mag parts.

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      • Headshotted
        Dear god, the Rabbits!
        • Sep 2021
        • 407
        • Colorado Springs

        #19
        So much paint has flown I cannot find my squegee
        Where are my pods now
        I could have sworn I had something important to put here...
        ​​​​​​Your friendly neighborhood Hive Tyrant. Convert to the cult Automag.

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        • coyote
          MCB Member
          • Jul 2020
          • 962

          #20
          Luau shirt on my back
          Brass versus aluminum
          Dead box is full now

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